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Eternal Reminiscence

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Thought I would enter a piece I have been tinkering with for a while. Not very good at naming things, so I thought the name of the comp would be good enough :P

Took me 6 houra on and off for a few days.

Enjoy!

EDIT: I was getting a few people telling me there were a few things wrong with it. I saw these and decided I needed to re-do it. So here it is, versions two. Better textures, lighting and composition.
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

First, this is the first critique I ever wrote. But I think this is one of your best pieces and also, I want to say thank you for your critique in my way <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>

I really love the light here. It's really shiny and you've got a nice kind of lens effect too.
About the starfield.... I love it and at the same time it's one thing I dont like about it. I really like that there are so many stars, but there are too many^^ Because in the parts where the bigger stars are, the picture seems low quality because of those many white points. Also, I would be nice to see some more bigger stars which would make the whole piece more interesting and would add some details to it (since you don't have a nebula in this piece, you have to make details otherwise).

The light on the two smaller planets is great. But the close up one looks too flat, maybe because its just a "line". You could liquify it to make it more round like I did in my "freya" piece or something. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
The texture of the big round planet is too varied for me. Because of the many light and dark parts of the texture it seems low quality too, since it really isn't^^

But the whole piece fits the title perfectly, better than my pieces (which isn't really hard <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>) and better then most of the other entries. I think you will make it at least under the top 3. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>

Hope you liked my first critique and sorry for my really bad english, I'm still learning <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>